Escribe una carta. Imagina que escribas a la madre de un amigo. Ella trabaja en una carrerea que te interesa y te ayudo a conseguir una entrevista para un puesto de verano en el que podrías aprender mucho sobre ese campo. Saluda ella
Dale las gracias por lo que hizo
Cuéntale como te fue el la entrevista
Explica que esperas hacer si te dan el puesto
Querido Señora Gomez,
Muchos Gracias por mi entrevista. La entrevista fue muy buena. Espero que yo encontró el trabajo. ¿Te gusta trabajo? Pienso que gustara trabajando en una abogada oficina. Algún día quiero ser un abogado. ¿Cual un universidad fuiste tú? Espero hacer oficina trabajo mucho. Quiero ayudar mucho. ¿Tienes siempre quieres ser una abogada? Yo tengo siempre quiero una abogada. Gracias otra vez por una entrevista. Tú eres una gran ayuda.
Sinceramente
Lacey M. Terrado
Name:LaceyDate: Assignment:
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use. yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback. yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
I think it was interesting
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time
write more
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3 comments:
Student Writer:
Lacey
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
Informal Writing
Date:
121707
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
sweet spanish skills
I have the following questions about your assignment:
it was too great no questions
Some suggestions for next time:
rock on girl
Student Writer:
Stephanie
Student Reviewer:
rizal
Assignment:
Informal Writing #1
Date:
12/17/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
4
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
4
What I really liked about this assignment:
.wow lacey should be a pro in spanish!
I have the following questions about your assignment:
nada
Some suggestions for next time:
comment mine?! =]
it looked very well written, but she could have probably wrote more.
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