Columbia tiene mucho violencia y criminales. Mucho personas en Columbia son viloent. Columbe necessitan Paz. Paz ayudara todo. Si las personas en Columbia tienen la paz ahà adentro vida que ellos hacen ya no es violentos. Paz es muy importante en Columbia por que las personas en colombia estan muy mal. Las personas peinsen violencia es muy beuno pero no es. Paz es en mi vida. yo soy no viloent y no soy es criminal. Tambien mi vida no tiene violencia. Y Tambien mi vida no tiene criminales. Paz ayudo mi vida y adyudara Columbia.
Name: Lacey
Date: Assignment:
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.yes
I try to make my writing interesting.yesI write a first draft and then I reread and revise.no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yesI check my spelling.yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
i stayed on topic
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
write more
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Student Writer:
Lacey
Student Reviewer:
Stephanie
Assignment:
Formal Writing 2
Date:
12/17/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
4
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
4
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
4
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
3
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
4
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
4
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
3
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
4
What I really liked about this assignment:
I think this is the best one written on your portfolio! Cool dude!
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Some suggestions for next time:
Your spanish skills are improving
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