Luis Ernesto Romeroera un pandillero, pero ahora el os ayuda . El Salvador tiene muchas pandillas. Las Pandillas son muy malo. Ellos viven una vida mala. Muy pandillos no tienen educacion.Luis gano respecto de su familia y amigos. Su vida es mejor ahora ayudando a miembros de pandilla viven una mejor vida . Esta es un vida que nadie quiere vivir. Hay personas que estan dispuestos a ayudarles. Luis es muy importante en los pandilleros vida por que Luis proporciona educaccion, programas de drugos y un mejor vida. Los pandilleros tiene un drugo problema pero Luis ayuden ellos con el problemo. Luis Ernesto es un persona bueno. Luis ahora un hija. Su hija lo motiva para mantener porción los miembros de los pandilleros. Luis Ernesto es héroe.
Self Assesment
Name: Lacey
Date: Assignment:
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.yes
I try to make my writing interesting.yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yes
I check my spelling.yesI check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.yesI make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
it was longer than usual
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
use more vocab
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2 comments:
Student Writer:
Lacey
Student Reviewer:
Stephanie
Assignment:
Formal Writing 1
Date:
12/17/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
4
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
3
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
3
The sentences relate to each other.
3
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
3
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
3
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
4
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
4
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
3
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
4
What I really liked about this assignment:
You know the information you are talking about. It was a nice article to read!
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Some suggestions for next time:
keep up the bueno work
even though i don't know spanish i feel that it is well written. it looks good.
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